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Alone Again
Contributed by
AnastasiaN
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:19:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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alone again
in my troubled head
the thoughts that run deep
are like glass beneath my feet
my heart it beats
in a lonesome seat
too sad to cry
and too tired to try
the leaves they hang
from the tree that strains
just to stay in the ground
while the world spins around
my heart it sighs
too tired to try
so sad and I cry
alone again this time
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Re: Alone Again
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by blackholesun on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:42:38 PM AEST
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| i really felt like you put your heart in that one,it was verry good keep on keepin on! |
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Re: Alone Again
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by MLCstar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:35:27 PM AEST
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| First let me say, Welcome to YPDC. Your words flow well while conveying your emotions to the reader. Wonderful job. |
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Re: Alone Again
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by mlcarter369 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:47:40 PM AEST
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| i like how is short but very touching |
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Re: Alone Again
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 12:35:20 AM AEST
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So short and sad....great job though
please comment on my work too
summer |
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