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How Dare You!!!!
Contributed by
pixie
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:13:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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How dare you spread the word,
Make your nasty deed heard,
You don’t spit in your Dad’s face,
You’ve done something you can’t erase.
He treated you as his own,
Gave you a place to call home,
But you have made you bed,
Now you must rest your head.
Don’t come knocking on our door,
Behind my back you call me a whore,
If I let my anger take control
I would destroy you & take your soul.
You have thrown his love in the bin,
His patience has long worn thin,
Telling people he is a child beater,
For your love he is no longer a competer.
You have gone much too far,
His heart bears an eternal scar,
You are definitely your Mothers son
Telling lies, is how you get your fun.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-07-11 14:13:08]
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Re: How Dare You!!!!
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:15:40 PM AEST
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Yow. This person doesn't sound very pleasant, should this have all the facts behind it - great write, pixie. I like this rhyme -
"But you have made you bed,
Now you must rest your head."
Keep on writing.
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Re: How Dare You!!!!
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by Stoney1 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:30:50 PM AEST
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Well constructed and muy intense. Kick 'um ina balls fer me!*g*
Stoney |
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Re: How Dare You!!!!
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by mdmorash on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:16:56 PM AEST
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| Go ahead and vent. Oh, and it's a great piece of poetry. |
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Re: How Dare You!!!!
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:53:11 PM AEST
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| Sounds like an awful person. Go ahead and get the anger out, confessions heal the soul I say. :) |
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Re: How Dare You!!!!
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by venkat on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 05:49:10 AM AEST
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| venting is o.k..this is good..I too hate liars..:-) venkat |
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