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If only you wish..
Contributed by
venkat
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:48:12 AM in AEST
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As I am there in a channel of light
To lead you all to the world of bliss
Come; enter the channel of the light
It is a mystic tunnel upwards it leads
With a stream of light to the heavens
Only after death few souls do enter
By the help of awaiting angels there
If they find the spirits are very pure
Will lead you to the world of bliss
The souls come by suicide or torture
Can not find their way to the tunnel
If only those souls are pure per chance
Angels may lead them to the channel.
And in case of those who strive to enter
Even when they are alive as mortals
They should be ego-less and sin-less
To realize me in their souls as the soul
Of all to merge in divine consciousness
Alive in bodies having lost their egos
Liberated their minds enter my channel
Sure they shall enjoy the eternal bliss
Even on the earth it is my promise
As I am there in a channel of light
To lead you all to the world of bliss!
11-7-2004
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:02:48 AM AEST
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My venerated colleague, this is a tremendous write of faith and love. I can visualize the channel of light in my mind and hope one day I will walk in it and be allowed eternal bliss. I shall hopefully one day meet you there and we can discuss philosophy for all eternity. You are a magnificent beam of light for so many.
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Rita |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Kie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:27:45 AM AEST
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This is an excellent piece Venkat. What a giving heart you have.
Kie : ) |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:42:13 AM AEST
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Sincere and elegantly painted words woven with lovely images.
Venkat you did a great job here. |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by pixie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:28:22 AM AEST
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Awwww this is beautiful Venkat... thanks for sharing,
your lil friend
pixie xx |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:35:43 AM AEST
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Beautiful and sincere.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by emystar on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 02:38:57 AM AEST
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Thought provoking.
Written well.
peace, huggs,
emy |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by katyqueen35 on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 03:00:11 AM AEST
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beautifull .............
POETRY AT IT'S BEST... |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by buchi on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 07:42:54 AM AEST
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"pure poetic expressions. Unquestionably beautiful in language and technique,
I prefer relevancy coming through the sounding out of human feelings…
Venkat you sharpen into the focus of our thoughts idea or feeling which we were only vaguely aware of before. Confession...truly 'unpretentious'..great write, a pleasure to have read…"
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:35:47 PM AEST
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| This is a very cool poem alive with inspiring words just as the other poems I have read by you are. |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 06:34:51 PM AEST
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Venkat kind sir.........there is so much light in your heart and soul.....thank you so much for sharing with us.......eloquent write!
Poetic hugs
consue |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by kalika_vidya on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 05:39:04 AM AEST
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| Mesmerising.so eloquent and unimaginable spiritual teaching so lovely.. k |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 11:51:12 PM AEST
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So very elegant...
A poet at it's best..
Great write.......... |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th July 2004 @ 07:58:59 AM AEST
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The "channel of light",ahhhhhh so refreshing to know that the one that beholds such a light carries with them a pure spirit. I know from whence these words flow, and I thank you for not letting me miss such radiance shine through my screen. Thousands of miles away may we be apart, but your words flow like a river right through my heart. Spoken in such a fluent manner as all "channels of light" should flow. Exceptional vision in this poem! Exceptional write!
Your friend in spirit. Thank you my dear friend!
Angel always....Joni 0:-) |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by emystar on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 10:28:10 PM AEST
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Thought prevoking write.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 03:02:43 AM AEST
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Inspirational work once again.
wildejohnny. |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by arden on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 01:52:41 PM AEST
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a very beautiful and elegant piece of writing.
youve done it again.
i enjoyed it.
5 stars
Arden |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by JennyFruFru on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 09:32:54 AM AEST
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| what a beautiful write... hopefully i will someday be in that channel of light along with fellow other poets... what a joyful piece :) |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Nazmythian on
Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 05:09:07 AM AEST
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I am so glad I stumbled upon this site and opted to stay for awile ... to view such writings as this, and more. For one of your accomplishments to find me worthy of not just your time but also your comments is quite humbling. 8 pages of your works, I have just randomly gone through. When 8 pages have I, I pray that my visions and musings have half the quality of your work. Thank you. You truly have a gift.
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Re: If only you wish..
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by thumper on
Monday, 11th October 2004 @ 11:44:06 AM AEST
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Just to be able to read your words of wisdom are enough for me. I know I'll never meet you here or elsewhere. The tunnel of light is not for me for I am but a human with many faults. But it would be nice.......
Thumps ; 0) |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:43:20 PM AEST
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| excellent use of going back to the beginning in the ending. i love it when that is incorporated in poems. bliss can be fleeting, but that is why you always go with it, and dont let it leave. |
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Re: If only you wish..
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by kye on
Saturday, 21st February 2009 @ 08:37:33 AM AEST
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It's a beautiful poem Venkat.
I love the thought of being alive in our body yet, losing our egos and merging in divine consciousness.
You are the deepest poet with thoughts spiritually on a level above meditation.
Your mind is a wonderful adventure.
Kie |
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