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Form now on
Contributed by
Archie
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:59:46 AM in AEST
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I don't know how all these trials shall turn out
they're coming too fast
Spending too much time thinking about them
will only make me sad
(First bridge and chorus)
The sunlight still shines down upon me
The stars still light my path
Hope renews my strength with in me
a time of joy at hand
From now on
I know I'll overcome
Friendships and true love still cheers me
on the path toward home
I do not have a lot that I can give them
save love and hope
(Second bridge and chorus)
But they love me through the darkness of my times
and I believe them when they say I will be fine
from now on
I know I'll overcome
(Third bridge and chorus)
Though the times I'm going through do make me sad
I am grateful that I know they shall not last
From now on
(From now on, now on) (Pause)
I know I can be strong
(First bridge and chorus to end)
Copyright ©
Archie
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2004-07-11 07:59:46]
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Re: Form now on
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:15:15 AM AEST
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Archie, love and hope are the best gifts you can give someone. This song will be a beautiful gift too. What better message to pass forward.
Hugs my friend,
Rita |
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by Rakerman1999 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 10:20:11 AM AEST
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One day I will turn on my radio and hear your words. Of this I have no doubt. Absolutely beautiful my friend.
Barkeep!
Larry |
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:00:01 PM AEST
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Oh Archie, this is wonderfully inspiring.....
Loved it and hope some day to hear it...
Hugs, my friend...
Jenni |
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Re: Form now on
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:24:52 PM AEST
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Oh Archie your talent for song writing is just amazing indeed!
This one is so positive, which we all need!
Loving, kind and always full of love.......
I know you're being blessed from Him above!
Enjoyed this very much!
Poetic hugs
consue |
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Re: Form now on
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 02:26:00 PM AEST
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Honesty abound in this one, Archie. Perhaps you could change 'cajoles' in the 2nd verse? It seems a little weak a term, compared to the rest of the verse for me, but that's my perspective.
Overall, I really like this one. It is a powerful expression. Well done.
Keep sharing. |
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Re: Form now on
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by emystar on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:56:25 PM AEST
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Good work here. Luv the positive sidee of things. Our planet needs more of this type of writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Form now on
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:50:46 AM AEST
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What I like about this one is the opposite Tune( expression) from verse to verse..Nice the way they twisted...
Cheers Robert |
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Re: Form now on
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:19:27 PM AEST
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Great piece...
As I wrote in my last poem, "the warrior yearns to war no more/ But only when the fight is won".
Keep your courage up, my friend. It is hard, but after all, it's not our own strength that's relied on.
Andrew |
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