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Smile.
Contributed by
backstreetdreamer
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:05:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I passed an old lady
on my way to town,
she smiled as she passed me
but her eyes held a frown,
so I stopped and I asked her
how was she today?
Then the smile reached her eyes
as she answered "o.k!"
We talked for a while
like a breath of fresh air,
her outlook was gloomy
but soon became fair!
A compliment here
and a nice remark there,
her eyes now held happiness
she hadn't a care.
We took our farewells
and we went on our way,
and thats all it took
to make someones day!
Copyright ©
backstreetdreamer
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2004-07-11 07:05:27]
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Re: Smile.
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:15:14 AM AEST
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That's all it takes to make someones day. beautiful poem, Well done. |
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Re: Smile.
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by freespirit on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:14:44 AM AEST
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good poem sounds like something I would write great way to think
keep up the good work God bless
hugs freespirit
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Re: Smile.
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by pixie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:37:56 AM AEST
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wonderful, a smile can be very contagious (?)
pixie xx |
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Re: Smile.
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by WinterFawn on
Friday, 23rd July 2004 @ 12:56:44 PM AEST
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Yes....sometimes we forget how far a smile and a kind word can go...beautiful verse.
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