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Tell me how you feel
Contributed by
mlcarter369
on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:56:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Sometimes i want to hurt myself
to take away the pain
before the hurting in my heart
makes me go insane
maybe i could cut myself
but that would be too slow
i could stab myself but
who knows how long that would go
maybe i could buy a gun
hold it to my head
and once i pulled the trigger
i would surely be dead
if i were to die
is there anyone whod care?
when they threw a funeral
would anyone be there?
i need someone out there
to help me cure the pain
tell me how they feel
before i do something insane
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Re: Tell me how you feel
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by TheVoice on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:24:55 PM AEST
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very strong write. remember, there is always someone who cares. always.
the voice
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Re: Tell me how you feel
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 05:00:23 PM AEST
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great write.
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