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The Day We Met
Contributed by
Thunderwolf
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Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:30:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I can still remember the day we met,
A day of fate that you can't forget.
I had always dreamed of love at first sight,
Heaven only knew that this was to be the night.
You we spending the night with a friend,
Her brother invited me, I wished it wouldn't end.
I can still recall the sparkle in your eye,
Wondering to myself, "Can I be her guy?"
I was afraid you wouldn't like me,
Maybe I too ugly or just too dorky.
But minute by minute it became so clear,
That, "Hey, I just might have a chance here."
I kept sneaking looks at you throughout the night,
Your beauty and charm broke my lonelyness with your light.
I did not want the night to ever end,
I could feel in my heart, our souls starting to blend.
The drive home was the longest of my life,
"Coould she be the one, could she be my wife?"
And all through the night I pondered my fate,
Knowing without doubt that you would be my mate.
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Thunderwolf
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2004-07-11 01:30:11]
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Re: The Day We Met
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by Gentledove on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:40:27 AM AEST
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I love you. You know everyone here is going to get sick of us. lol.
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Re: The Day We Met
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:46:54 AM AEST
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Another great write!!! So tender and loving...
Keep the pen flowing.....
To Dove...No way!!! We all enjoy a great love story....
Hugs to you both..
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Re: The Day We Met
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:05:29 AM AEST
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absolutely beautiful and soo romantic:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: The Day We Met
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:54:55 AM AEST
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Nawwwww, if I did it would only because I am envious, lol. Great show of love for Gay, TW.
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Re: The Day We Met
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by Buggsy on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:51:41 PM AEST
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Absolutly beautiful. I can only begin to imagine
such love as never having experienced it myself.
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