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WISHING ON A STAR!
Contributed by
Robert_Edgar_Burns
on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 07:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I LOOKED UP TOWARD HEAVEN TONIGHT.
THE CLOUDS HAD PARTED.
THE STARS SHONE BRIGHT.
AND WHEN I SAW THIS BEAUTY NEW,
I COULD NOT HELP BUT THINK OF YOU!
AND THEN I WHISPERED
YOUR NAME QUITE LOW,
WHILE WISHING ON THE STARLIGHT'S GLOW.
I WISHED YOU IN MY ARMS TODAY,
WHERE YOU WOULD LIKE TO ALWAYS STAY.
BUT I KNOW THIS IS A FABLED DREAM.
I WILL WISH IT STILL UNTIL I’VE SEEN,
THAT MIRACLES REALLY CAN COME TRUE,
WHERE YOU BELONG TO ME,
AND I BELONG TO YOU!
robertburns2@mac.com
homepage.mac.com/robertburns2/…
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Robert_Edgar_Burns
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2002-10-24 19:00:00]
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 09:26:16 PM AEST
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Hey Rob, it's good to see you posting again. This is so lovely....as usual.....
Hope all is well with you.
Jenni |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by meg on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 02:32:25 AM AEST
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| I ENJOYED READING YOUR POEM, IT WAS VERY GOOD! |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by dantoad on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 05:29:52 AM AEST
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this is so wonderful..i wish i had some poeple say things like this about me!
**~dantoad~** |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by emystar on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 12:10:02 PM AEST
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Hi friend,
I agree with everyone elses comments!!!!
Very strong, seneous write!!!!
Great 2 see u back!!!!
PEACE, LUV, WISHING ON A STAR,
emy star |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:07:17 PM AEST
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| Glad to see you writing again! This, as your others was really good! I enjoy reading your work!Christina |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by unpredictable on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 09:03:24 AM AEST
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| this poem was awsome, i enjoy reading the poetry that you write. . .i think you are an amazing poet. . .keep up the great work |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 4th November 2002 @ 11:41:56 PM AEST
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| wonderful write. thank you for sharing it |
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Re: WISHING ON A STAR!
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by lilch4ever on
Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 04:10:26 PM AEST
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| I like you poem very nicely written. |
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