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Set Yourself Free
Contributed by
TorturaInsomniae
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:44:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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staring through a window
this is your world
you ended your life
looking through this glass
looking for life
you needed a mirror
to watch yourself destruct
watch yourself
blind and still
slowly falling to the floor
bleeding on your world
now cutting deep into your flesh
its too late to live
your world has got the best of you
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TorturaInsomniae
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2004-07-10 23:44:25]
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Re: Set Yourself Free
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by frohemiasweetie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:05:38 AM AEST
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Love this poem. The bareness of it...Great. |
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Re: Set Yourself Free
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by Pyrofungus on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 04:08:30 PM AEST
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we need mirrors to watch a lot of things go on 'cause were to blind to see...especialy self destrut....
please comment on my work too
Summer |
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Re: Set Yourself Free
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 01:01:38 AM AEST
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| <33 very well written. |
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