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Finding Myself
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:36:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Finding Myself
You never knew what you did to me
What happened with every word
You ever uttered to me
You did it intentionally
To make me different
I never knew till I realized
That I was afraid to live
Afraid to go outside
To be judged on everything
My inside is crumbling
I'm losing everything
Except the hate inside me
The negativity that resides
Because of the hate inflicted
Upon me from everyone else
I'm losing myself
To hide within
I'm crumbling inside
To bury myself
Forever within
As my outside
Cuts itself
To find myself
I'm finding what I don't like
Someone scarred
That hates life
I'm finding what I don't like
Negativity of who I am to be
Someone destroyed within
I'm finding what I don't like
Someone that listens
To the negativity inflicted upon them
Someone that hates who they are
Because of them
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Re: Finding Myself
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:46:37 PM AEST
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| I'm still finding myself as well, so I can't promise that everything is going to be fine for you. But I do believe that things can change, whether for the worse of for the better I don't know. But things will change. |
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Re: Finding Myself
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 11:29:09 PM AEST
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Beautiful I agree with the first comment and reading the poem over again I can find myself relating to the poem... very scary.
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Re: Finding Myself
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by Petznick on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 11:14:17 PM AEST
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wicked, after reading this any person should think twice about ridiculing another human. definite eye-opener for myself
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