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A Lie

Contributed by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:30:13 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Everything, it seems, is just the same
I embrace the thought and excuse the pain
Satisfied for the moment, but only a bit
Eyes wide open in a room dimly lit

With a sigh

I remove the battery from the clock
Ignore the door when angst starts to knock
I escape to a corner that you can’t see
Knowing that I must wait there patiently

But not why

I refuse to listen when reality calls
I convince myself that I will not fall
I stop the trembling when it again starts
Regardless of the begging from my heart

I won’t cry

Smiling but only in halfhearted ways
I tell myself that it’s just one more day
Determined to numbly say goodbye
It’s hard as anything I’ve ever tried

I can't deny

Making up stories to pass the time
In the dark of night, I walk the line
Creating reasons in a warped mind
Thinking that they are the right kind

To then apply

Believing logic can overcome love
Hoping reason will give hurt a shove
I go about rationalizing you away
Back into the past, away from today

Well, I try

With every ounce of hidden strength
I carry on, going to great lengths
I try to break free from your hold
But in the end, if truth be told

It goes awry

And my thoughts return again to you
For it seems no matter what I do
I am not strong, nor am I wise
And when I tell you that I’ve tried

It’s just a lie




Copyright © Silent-No-More ... [ 2004-07-10 23:30:13]
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Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by faith_my_eyes on Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:52:07 PM AEST
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well-crafted poem! It is very well written and emotional, and I found the pattern and flow to be excellent .
Em


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by frohemiasweetie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:03:02 AM AEST
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YEAH!!!!! That is an awesome poem. Love what it conveys and how it comes.


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:36:04 AM AEST
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great write, wonderful flow,

piie xx


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by RobertKilpatrick on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:49:15 PM AEST
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het great write, I like the way you structured the poem..
Cheers Robert


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by blueheart on Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 09:33:45 PM AEST
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This is such a great write. Definitely one of the best I've read today.
The rhyming was awesome and the emotions ran high.
I related so well to this piece.
Great write.


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Psyche on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 11:00:20 AM AEST
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This makes my heart ache in a way that reverberates toward my stomach. Very touching, and very deeply felt. You have done a wonderful job of expressing hurt/pain/frustration.Thank you.


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 09:27:35 PM AEST
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You are always very creative with your foramt and your style - I enjoyed this.


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 01:17:24 PM AEST
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sounds like time when you could really have used a hand.
I hope all is better!


Re: A Lie (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:58:54 PM AEST
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Aw, so emotional and touching. I love the way you formatted this one. Very creative .




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