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Twister
Contributed by
Randyjohnson
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:29:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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A powerful twister tore a man's life apart.
It took his wife and kids and left him with a broken heart.
In just a moment, his entire family was killed.
A marriage ended that took twenty years to build.
Tears form in his eyes as he recalls a time with his wife when he first kissed her.
Everything he held dear in life was destroyed by that twister.
Copyright ©
Randyjohnson
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2004-07-10 22:29:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Twister
(User Rating: 1 ) by MLCstar on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:36:14 PM AEST (User
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Could the twister be a metaphor? Even if it is not, it is still a good poem. |
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Re: Twister
(User Rating: 1 ) by Gentledove on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:43:26 PM AEST (User
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Beware the raging storm. nice write.
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Re: Twister
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:09:48 PM AEST (User
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Yeah, aand we never know who will be next.
Very thought prevoking even tho sad.
huggs,
emy
Great writng
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