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OH SOUL
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:31:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
spiritual
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BODY AND SOUL
Oh, Soul, aching, reaping, waiting for a time
When a Suzerain Timelord, might chime
Hiss Orris Time-piece, and set thy Soul free
To eventually end up in a myriad eternity
A Lilac lamp, shines, waiting for thee.
EARTH AND BODY
Three days after Lammas was born to thee
Earth laden misty fair, Tullurian am I
Of a nature, lifeless, in decline, ready to diminish
The lamp, that awaits the sublime entrance
Of what lasting vestige, shall my Soul leave to thee?
HEAVEN AND EARTH
A eminent solemn entrance, was as foretold
Ethereal waters, Cherubic Angels divine behold
Oh Diamond firmament of celestial Sky
Of this does the Lilac lamp, testify
A prose of ashes Terrene, have I left for thee.
© Robert Kilpatrick.
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-10 20:31:47]
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Re: OH SOUL
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:08:14 PM AEST
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| The themes for each stanza is a nice touch to the poem. This is a wonderful write. :) |
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Re: OH SOUL
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:21:54 AM AEST
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| Good poem. |
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Re: OH SOUL
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 14th July 2004 @ 02:22:38 AM AEST
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Oh...imagery is good..but I feel they lack some clarity..sorry..I don't mean to discourage you..but
Keep writing on..I will be very much pleased if you can go through few of my recent poems....Om Namah Sivaaya....venkat |
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