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What Motivates Me
Contributed by
gentledove
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 05:50:05 PM in AEST
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I was motivated to write when I first realized,
I'm a person with feelings,not to be disguised.
The road has been long and loaded with baggage,
I've been hurt on my journey, I'm worth being salvaged.
I love to laugh and have a good time,
At the expense of others, it would be a crime.
I love God, He saved my soul,
If not for Him, I wouldn't reach my goal.
I love to explore this world we were given,
Find all the treasures of life that are hidden.
I love my husband with all of my heart,
Our son and daughter, our creation, our art.
I've discovered this talent to write poetry,
Completely by accident, I know it sounds loony.
I think back to the time when I felt despised,
I was looking in the mirror, my soul demoralized.
I've gathered my strength and put my foot down,
I'm worth it to me, I'll not be put down.
I'm motivated to wrtie to help others see,
They are worth it, They motivate me.
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gentledove
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:00:47 PM AEST
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Yes, life can be difficult. Those are excellent reasons for writing. I think most of us write basically for the same reasons. It helps us make it through life. It certainly does me. You received a beautiful gift that you use well.
Rita |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:48:45 PM AEST
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| Lovely ..its good,, keep on writing.. lovely as usual.. cheers.. |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:30:33 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt, i for one am happy you picked up your pen:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by Adriean on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 08:17:00 PM AEST
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| truelly blunt. Well written |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:00:55 AM AEST
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You have always been worth it to me babe.
love ya. Thunderwolf |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by pixie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 05:47:30 AM AEST
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another wonderful instalment from you :) your poems are wonderful,
pixie xx |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 11:09:54 PM AEST
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You've told the great story behind your writes, what a wonderful piece.
Nostalgic and so powerful. |
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Re: What Motivates Me
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by Blest474 on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 07:53:39 AM AEST
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it kinda sounds corny but I really really like that i can re l8 to all that (except the kid thing)
oh and keep proclaiming God thru poems it sound so beautiful. |
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