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alone
Contributed by
Hannah_Heaven
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:02:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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im standing on the edge
ive pushed my sins as far as i can go
im weak and standing naked...alone
you came for the ride
you sat ontop and watched in glee
as i pushed my sins along with me
i watched you come
and you laughed out...like this was fun?!
im at the end anyway so just forget it doesnt matter
your acting like the mad hatter
full of bull mocking me
i cant believe...i should of seen
i put my trust in you
i should of seen oh my god i should of knew
you used me just like they all do
why did i love you i dont even know you...who?
things arent the way they were before
yor just watching and you ignore
the fact that im done and my life is comming to an end
you twisted my thoughts and maded them bend
around your little finger
and my dreams stop and linger
around the lightning and i stop and think
its over and i jump...and im dead before i blink
i grew alone
and i died alone
and now i spend my dark nights swimming in the pool of blood
alone...
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2004-07-10 16:02:20]
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Re: alone
(User Rating: 1 )
by Adriean on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:08:19 PM AEST
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| Very intense, Very deep. Easy to relate |
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Re: alone
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 04:12:03 PM AEST
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such a deep write, great stuff
pixie xx |
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