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Five Haiku of Assorted Flavors
Contributed by
frohemiasweetie
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 01:15:38 PM in AEST
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Breeze is thoughtful
Lifting leaves cooling armpits
Warring with hot sun
Red black green make me
Marcus Garvey grateful for
Liberation love
Christopher Wallace
Robbed of life at twenty four
They left his wallet
I open my soul
Only positivity
Invited to tea
Harsh terms in cold world
Bleed soft tears on my wishes
Only angels hear
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Re: Five Haiku of Assorted Flavors
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 12:47:27 PM AEST
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hey there, i just got your comment on "kings and things and wings and" so on... you know, i can't even recall the title right now. BUT YOU KNOW... lol that ONE poem lol I'm so glad you liked it : ) That's just how my thoughts work too... lol
So naturally of course I've come to read some of YOUR work ; ) This is the first I've read and I must say that so far I'm really enjoying the reading.
I absolutely love your fourth haiku... I'm not sure if I'm interpreting right, but the feeling just clicked. One of those little things in life like being invited to something ordinary is so ... fullfilling in small ways. That one makes me smile : )
I'll read on... I'm excited to see what else you've written!
love,
Ellen
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Re: Five Haiku of Assorted Flavors
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:51:12 PM AEST
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| very interesting haikus. |
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