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4:00 a.m.
Contributed by
Stoney1
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:56:59 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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I awaken to sense the darkness surrounding me,
The window to my soul cannot bar its blackness,
I am alone and bathed in cold sweat,
...I feel utter desolation
And morose thoughts weigh me down,
Once again I feel keen anxiety
Tearing at my soul like a jagged blade,
Opening old wounds
And leaving them to fester
I am undone once again
There is no hope...
I am defenseless against it
My stomach churns in fear
as I contemplate
my only other option...
Stoney
Copyright ©
Stoney1
... [
2004-07-10 11:56:59]
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Re: 4:00 a.m.
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:40:12 PM AEST
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this just emanates loneliness... sad and beautifully written, hang in there:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: 4:00 a.m.
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by Archie on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 06:59:35 AM AEST
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| I am glad you did not pursue the other option and I hope things work out for you. |
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Re: 4:00 a.m.
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by Ceres on
Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 08:44:51 AM AEST
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That sure paints a sad picture! But it was perfectly written and very descriptive.
~Life sucks. Life rocks. Live it. Write it.~
Ceres |
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