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Sunburned Eyes
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:45:57 AM in AEST
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maybe what were mad at, is nothing. we just need to be mad for no reason, this high school drama is so ***** stupid...- get the ***** over it-...-sing like no one is listening-...-its not a mistake if it repeats-...- your lies are whats going to bury you-...-my voice is going to bury you under this summer sun-...-ill try an fix this broken wound, i never wanted this to hurt as much as this should-...-once i get started who is going to stop me?...-lets live like millionaires and not give a ***** about anything...-act your age, or are you 10 all over again?...-i always seem to be staring with my eyes closed-...-i would love to see you fall even harder next time around-...-i dont need anything else but you and my closest friends-...-the only thing holding me back is myself...-ive never seen anything that beautiful with that smile-...-she is suffering because she cant have what she is seeing around her...-i guess she didnt mean much to you, a few fights and your knees are getting weak, your shaking but please dont fall...-in other words get back up, and make this friendship last...- you are better than you are acting, your star has been black, its not shining anymore, at least in my eyes...-the best thing i can think to do right now is just leave it alone-...-pictures are only temprorary, but memories last forever...-its better now that this wound is beggining to heal-...- im so much happier now, that your happy...-im sorry for all the things that i said 20/20 looking back...-this feels too perfect, now im killing myself-...-this feels so good, im scared of tearing this down...-im outside, but im trying to keep you inside-...-ill burn myself for you-...- it looks like theres a brighter sky in front of us, so let me bring this brighter sky into me...-how do i get back to where i was?,when you were smiling baby...-rewind it, and look its not impossible...- intoxicated dreams of you...-
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Re: Sunburned Eyes
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by Monkeybones99 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:07:38 PM AEST
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| This poem was alittle hard for me to read but some of the lines rang true. |
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Re: Sunburned Eyes
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by Stoney1 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:20:43 PM AEST
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heh, heh...this is what you call a 'tight' poem, huh?*g*
Hate to see you let it all hang out , then.
Suggestion:
In order to make it easier for your reader to view the poem,
you might consider some formatting rather than presenting
it in a block like that.
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