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Feelings Shared
Contributed by
yellow_sundragon
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:27:26 AM in AEST
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SecretLove
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I've lost my mind
Got left somewhere far behind
Turning, but there's no where to go
C'mon, let me follow your flow
You're being so mysterious
Making me all curious
Your ploys are working well
(I know, I can tell)
Do you realize you're leading me on
But say the word and I'll be gone
Snap your fingers, I'll do what you say
Yeah, right, that's so gay
If I asked, what would you reply?
I wanna know before I try...
What'd you do if my feelings I showed?
I need to know before my head explodes...
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by Monkeybones99 on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:46:58 AM AEST
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| Good write I like how it's not only a poem but also a conversation. |
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 11:49:24 AM AEST
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great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:45:30 PM AEST
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I think we are all a little hesitant about beginning new relationships because there is always the possibility of failure. But it is one of those things in life that can only be assured of success by actual experience. Best of luck to you. I like the way you wrote your conversation out.
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 03:01:03 PM AEST
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Don't commit your heart yet! Wait and see first what the other persons intentions be!
Keep you heart and your feelings deep within your chest.........then just incase.........you know the rest!
This was a wonderful conversation....great reasoning on your part.........now just don't lose you feelings and your heart! Love with you mind first.......know what I mean?
Love you
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by lovesucks on
Thursday, 14th October 2004 @ 12:33:25 AM AEST
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| really enjoyed this thanks for sharing this...keep writing |
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Re: Feelings Shared
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:50:21 AM AEST
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uh huh this explains its brilliantness itself (see I can make us words with 'ness' on the end too *sticks tongue out* )
"Snap your fingers, I'll do what you say
Yeah, right, that's so gay"
for some reason, that bit had me giggling, probably just me and my sense of humour but still. Excellent hun. *nods*
Your sis
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