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I Surrender
Contributed by
RhythmBndt
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:31:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I surrender
Everything I am to you
I'm weak with desire
And it's all thanks to you
I surrender
My deepest desires & dreams
Mold me with you hands
Into the sexual being I am when I'm with you
I surrender
To out wants & needs
Let me make your fantasies come true
I surrender to you
Copyright ©
RhythmBndt
... [
2004-07-10 09:31:00]
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Re: I Surrender
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:44:27 AM AEST
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| I surrender....my admiration to you on crafting a lovely and enjoyable poem. Well done and keep on writing. |
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Re: I Surrender
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by mdmorash on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:45:01 AM AEST
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| Very cool. |
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Re: I Surrender
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:47:27 AM AEST
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lovely write,
pixie xx |
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Re: I Surrender
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by Kie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:05:44 AM AEST
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Sensual with a romantic lover's feel to it.
Very enjoyable to read.
Kie : ) |
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