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Dont
Contributed by
veruca
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Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:48:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Dont go
Dont leave me here
All alone
Be the one to hold me tight
In the moon-light every night
So dont surrender your life for mine
Will you be here when I am young
Will you be here when I am old
Please dont leave me
Please dont go
Please dont make me feel so unloved
Make me feel wanted
Make me feel loved
Just please....................
Dont break my heart
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veruca
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2004-07-10 02:48:07] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dont
(User Rating: 1 ) by faithmairee on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:07:58 AM AEST (User
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the simplicity and frankness of your poem impressed me...this is a sad but beautiful write...well done!
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