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Slipping
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:10:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I lay awake every night
Wondering where I've gone wrong
How many times did I tell you I loved you?
Didn't that give you a reason to stay?
You say you only want me to be happy
But everytime you push me away, it hurts
Where is the happiness in loosing the one you love?
I just want to hold you once more
Get the feeling I did back then
I just want the rush that I yearned
That made me fall more in love with you
Where did that all go?
Where did I go wrong?
This is something thats coming from my heart
I can't hide what I feel inside for you
No matter who else I am with
I still dream of you
I'll always dream of you
For you are my escape from this hellish world
And if I can't escape in the real world
Maybe my dreams will be enough to keep me above water
Because I am close to drowning without you here
My body slips under the surface
You said you'd always be there for me
Well, I'm drowning
Please save me...
Or are you not there anymore?
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2004-07-10 02:10:05]
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Re: Slipping
(User Rating: 1 )
by veruca on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:19:56 AM AEST
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WOW! WOWY! WOW! tHIS IS REALLY STRONG!!!!!!! THIS IS SUCH AN EMOTIONAL WRITE. I FEEL BAD THAT HE KEEPS PUSHING YOU AWAY BUT I FEEL GOOD ABOUT HOW HE DIDNT WANT YOU TO GET IN TROUBLE....
THIS WRITE WAS ALSO ROMANTIC AND SWEET!
LOV YA,
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Re: Slipping
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by Catalina on
Tuesday, 27th February 2007 @ 10:00:21 AM AEST
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So deep and heartfelt. I know of the pain of wanting what's unattainable. Giving of yourself until theres nothing left. Be true to yourself and do for you only what is best.
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