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°°°Patterns°°°
Contributed by
OreO
on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:15:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I awake in the morning, alone in bed so cold
I look at the ceiling, as my arms unfold
I dream of your whisper, saying "i love you"
Then i turn my head, and i get down and blue
…
I take a deep breath as i try not to cry
I reach my hand over, on that empty pillow to slide
I turn the other way and crawl out of bed
As my heart cries for you, and tears i shed
…
I go to work to survive 5 days a week
It pays the bills, but i am so weak
I listen to people and how happy they are
I envy what they have, I want to shine like they are
…
I get in my car, i head back to my home
My head spins with thoughts, as i drive and roam
I dream you'll be there, waiting for me
With your arms open wide, a soft kiss for me
…
But i open the door, and nobody is home
I stand and i freeze, then i hear the phone
I hope that it's you calling to say you love me
But it's just a bill collector, wanting more money
…
I hang up the phone, i turn on the tv
I get lost in a world of drama, fright and fantasy
When the movies are done, i go to my bed
Where my pillow is wet, from my tears i shed
…
Another day gone, and i'm still dreaming
My heart is dying, my soul is screaming
I made it through another day of pain
Tomorrow i'll get up, and do it all again
Copyright ©
OreO
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2002-10-24 16:15:00]
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by emystar on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 04:59:11 PM AEST
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Hey Cookie,
I've been this person before altho I'm resoabally happy without a relationship now...
Very good write!!!!!!
Great!!!!!
emy |
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by DreamWeaver on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 06:17:24 PM AEST
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| This is exactly what I do ... a perfect re-enactment of my week .... so sad ... but nice to know someone else knows how I feel. Great write - love it! |
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by peace123 on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 08:08:31 PM AEST
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| good write...much emotion and depth |
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 10:37:06 AM AEST
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hmm... you've been spying on me... really though... there is so much description, and it fits me to a "t". But at least, somehow, we find the courage to get out of bed... and do it all again. No matter how badly it hurts.
Great write,
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by Fwog on
Friday, 25th October 2002 @ 11:18:25 AM AEST
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OreO you tell it like it is,
this is painful but also an offering of hope
well written and so real
thanks |
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 27th October 2002 @ 06:51:15 AM AEST
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Very painful write..but well done!! Can feel the loneliness in this.... Please stay strong tho...life will get better...
Jenni |
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Re: °°°Patterns°°°
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by darkeyedman on
Friday, 6th December 2002 @ 11:59:08 PM AEST
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| i'd like to hear Jewell sing this |
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