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Love Or Lie
Contributed by
Adriean
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:54:26 PM in AEST
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The direction my life is taking, the way my heart is breaking;
Allowed me to see to the past, to the moment we shared last;
Of how he is no longer in my life, and how my existence is filled with strife;
No longer a comfort in my home, teaching me things I need to be shown;
Then I recall our instant attraction, when we both decided to take action;
Something only believed to be love, I took the jump blinded by trust;
The light has been shown to me, and now I can see;
I realize that you aren' that guy, that I had been decieved by my eyes;
our relationship had turned to lust, and by then we cared to little to make a fuss;
So we kept on living a lie, neither wanting to say good-bye;
I finally decided it was time to walk away, though what made me I could not say;
So now I'm going to say good-bye, because our love was nothing but a lie
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Re: Love Or Lie
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by Sinful_Misery on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:57:35 PM AEST
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| Very good write! I relate to it as well. The whole lust thing. I have done some poems on love versus lust and what not. And it's true, even if you know deep down, it is hard to walk away. Takes a lot of strength. |
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Re: Love Or Lie
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:42:34 AM AEST
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| this is a great poem great rhyme as well .... |
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