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Days Ending
Contributed by
Sinful_Misery
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:36:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As dusk is descending, the stars entrail in the night,
The sky is pleasant pink, meaning sailors delight,
The breeze is so passive, and gracious in it's advance,
The trees seem to whisper, and move slowly at glance,
The lucidity of the ending light, is mindful at heart,
Today is now ending, and a new day will soon start,
As the sun sets in the west, the moon is now distinct,
The night and day for just a moment, are conspicuously linked,
I look into the night, and observe the dark sky,
Which persuades me to say, "To this day, good bye"
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Re: Days Ending
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:09:39 AM AEST
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| Now this one I really do like.. this is my kind of poem .. love it.. your use of word here are a delight.... good stuff |
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Re: Days Ending
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:15:29 AM AEST
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very pretty:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Days Ending
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by veruca on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:32:29 AM AEST
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I loved this poem so dearly much...
I love this type of poetry........I too loved
your choice of words....great job!!!!!!!
lov ya,
veruca |
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