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Be with me
Contributed by
ilimow
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:25:17 PM in AEST
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Clogged are my thoughts
Troubled is my soul
Quietly I am watching
Shattering of my whole
Courage I don’t need
Faith is of no use
Words wouldn’t heal
Nothing would now amuse
I’m a man with a will
Wanting to play his destiny
All would but be worth, but
If you are with me
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Re: Be with me
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:01:44 PM AEST
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I know we all have low periods in our lives but please don't let life get you down. I am just recovering from a great loss but I know that the light will shine again. As dark as it gets there is always light somewhere. You wrote your pain extremely well. That is what I do. I use my poetry to pour out my emotions. It is the safest and most sure way of purging emotions for me.
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Re: Be with me
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:09:11 PM AEST
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Truly a wonderfully written poem.... tho so sad.. I can identify with your words at this point in my life...... but you have to stay strong.... as I must also...
Thank you so much....
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Re: Be with me
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 22nd July 2004 @ 10:02:26 PM AEST
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this poem is gorgeous:) hugs n' love nessa
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