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Flood of my Soul
Contributed by
gentledove
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:03:32 PM in AEST
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I"ve discovered a way for me to express,
My heartache and pain, when I'm under stress.
I let my thoughts flow out my brain,
Tumbling, spiraling through pumping vein.
Some how they reach through this pen I hold,
Bursting forth, their story to be told.
Helter Skelter as I write them down,
Coming too fast, I feel myself drown.
The flood of feelings coming from my soul,
My heart becomes weary, unable to console.
I battle my way up to the surface,
Sputtering, kicking, the flood seems endless.
I see a lighthouse out in the distance,
Beckoning to me with its flashing guidance.
A lifeline thrown from my very own consciense,
The flood waters recede, restoring balance.
My heart no longer weary, I'm able to control,
The flood of feelings coming from my soul.
Copyright ©
gentledove
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2004-07-09 22:03:32]
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:28:13 PM AEST
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It seems to be the strongest lifeline I have ever found. Safe and sure. Gay, this is an extraordinary write. So strong and powerful and shows we can save ourselves if need be.
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:33:20 PM AEST
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im much the same way, this is a wonderful poem, simply beautiful:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:47:24 PM AEST
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| A touch of your self.. understand it well .. nice work... |
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:52:27 PM AEST
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Great write, Dove....
It works for me.....
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:41:04 AM AEST
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this is a great write.. I really do enjoy reading your work....
pixie xx |
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Re: Flood of my Soul
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 12:01:51 AM AEST
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You keep writing babe, you're doing great.
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