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The Path You're On
Contributed by
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:34:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The Path You’re On
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The path you’re on might bring you riches,
Might bring you attention and incredible fame.
The path you’re on might make you noticeable,
Making you a house hold name.
The path you’re on might find you friends,
Drinking buddies and social pests
The path you’re on might make you feel,
Like you’re better than all the rest.
The path you’re on might bring you happiness,
If only for a little while.
The path you’re on darkens the future,
For you’re living in the now.
The path you’re on needs no explaining,
For it’s really easy to see.
The path you’re on is leading to a place,
That takes you further from me.
The path you’re on brings me sadness,
It’s difficult to watch you go.
The path you’re on is undetermined,
It’s future no one can know.
The path you’re on I can not change,
Only you can choose the road.
But the path you’re on leads to nowhere,
And that’s not something that you’re owed.
How I wish I could save you,
From the path I know you’re on.
For I’m afraid in my heart,
That this path will bring your harm.
Copyright ©
Jeff_Scott_Morehead
... [
2004-07-09 20:34:41]
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Re: The Path You're On
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:07:57 PM AEST
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hey this is great.. i write on similar subjects
Great work. |
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Re: The Path You're On
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by emystar on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:59:17 PM AEST
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A bit sad but written well.
we all have to learn and hindsight is much better than fore sight.
Good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Path You're On
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by TBessant on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 02:49:20 PM AEST
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| that's hot i think you got something keep up the good work |
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