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MARVEL OF THE SELF
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:31:29 PM in AEST
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You can take me, to the edge of the sea
And make me walk, The forests of Green
And I'll sit you up on the tallest of trees
And you’ll see the vast plains where you’ve been.
And if you do not wonder, by the marvel of your self
At the depths of your deep Blue Ocean
And see the vast Pearl Oyster of your wealth
Then what on Earth, have you set in motion.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-09 20:31:29]
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Re: MARVEL OF THE SELF
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:41:35 PM AEST
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Interesting food for thought. :)
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Re: MARVEL OF THE SELF
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:27:52 AM AEST
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| Reflection is always good espeacially when done soberly. This is a very admirable write. |
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Re: MARVEL OF THE SELF
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Friday, 20th August 2004 @ 03:36:55 AM AEST
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| I agree with gentledove. this was very interesting. good write!!! |
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Re: MARVEL OF THE SELF
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by liquidsunshine on
Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 09:45:29 PM AEST
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This is so meaty with so few words. This is the dictionary definition of a perfect poem, my friend. Applause for that.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea |
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