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I HATE FLYING
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:54:28 PM in AEST
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Sitting in a small cramped chair
Thinking about, living, life and dying
And soon, we will be in the air
Oh my God, were flying.
Life on a wing
What a strange thing
Tube in the Sky
Oh me ,Oh my.
Hours pass by
Were still in the air
Do tell me, this is a lie
Don't worry, There's nothing to fear
Said she, with the wine
Everything's just fine
Have some more beer.
I,ll just have Orange juice
And none of that Goose
And I,ll try and get some sleep
As long as we don't end up in the deep.
© ROBERT KILPATRICK
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-09 19:54:28]
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by Gentledove on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:39:44 PM AEST
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Cool write. I love flying. Nothing like the roar of the jet as it builds speed for lift off.
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:19:27 AM AEST
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im with gentledove on that, i love to fly, but that voyage across the ocean was a doozy! arg over 12 hours, lol, just how many ways can one sit!? great write:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:56:53 AM AEST
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Well I'm going to agree with the others, I love flying. :)
Intresting write. |
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by Merry on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 06:51:02 PM AEST
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I love this poem - this is exactly how I feel about flying - OMG - get me off this thing - I require heavy medcation to fly LOL - well done Robert
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by darkfairy1188 on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 08:27:14 PM AEST
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| im afraid of hieghts. i have never been on a plane but i hope to go to ireland someday and im terrified at the thought of going on a plane... but good writting :) |
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Re: I HATE FLYING
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by Archie on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 04:30:50 AM AEST
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| This is more simple than your sultry pieces and not as imaginative, but it is a good write nonetheless. |
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