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Amnesia
Contributed by
comfortablynumb
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:49:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Something hit me in the head
My memory's coming back again
As fast as it left me long ago
I'm missing what we had back then.
I thought it was over
I thought it was done
Almost convinced myself
That those feelings were gone.
My mind's still replaying
The dance we danced for hours
Until I fell tired into your arms
And succumbed to your power.
Your grip was so strong
Thought you held me too tight
Now I wish you would hold me
Like you held me that night.
I never quite gave you all of me
We were never quite as close as you wanted to be
There was always a piece I kept inside
More out of fear than out of pride.
Now I have to hold myself back
I can't let this flame grow into a fire
I know that if I held you again
I'd let you have your every desire.
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comfortablynumb
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2004-07-09 19:49:45]
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Re: Amnesia
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by wikedladi on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:17:21 PM AEST
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| This is a really great poem! i can complete understand not being able to give all of yourself to someone, you run the risk of being pushed into the ground. keep up the good work! |
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Re: Amnesia
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:40:17 PM AEST
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You've done well portraying the mixed feelings bottled up inside once you've lost something you wish you'd never have let go to begin with. Keep on writing!
Angel always...joni |
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