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Disfigured Souls
Contributed by
pyrofungus
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:38:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Enter my kingdom of frail human souls
Abandon those untruthful looks
You can't hide here
We see it all!
Watch us stand
Watch us scream
Watch us as we stand and turn to dust!
Disfigured souls running amongst
Crack a neck
It breaks
We become new!
We feed off sins
We'll drag you down
Suck you dry
And crown you ours!
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-07-09 19:38:47]
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by waos on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:22:26 PM AEST
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| definitely deserves the tital "dark". and its wonderful. i love it and the images it brings to my mind. awesome job. |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by arden on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 08:29:47 PM AEST
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wowy... i loved this! very very dark and awesome. great write. 5 stars, wish i could give more.
Arden |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 02:23:29 AM AEST
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| Heavy : Great lines ... good stuff |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 03:13:40 AM AEST
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wow, this was a splendid dark piece.
I loved the poem as much as I did the title. |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by pixie on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 10:46:22 AM AEST
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very dark, a great write,
pixie xx |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by Destiny on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 07:58:52 PM AEST
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I like this alot, ironically enough it reminds me of my family. Good job.
Des |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by TwEeK on
Saturday, 7th August 2004 @ 10:16:53 PM AEST
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please i surrendur!! i dont wanna die!!
lol nice poem! i really enjoyed it, very creepy indeed
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by CrimsonTears on
Wednesday, 11th August 2004 @ 10:41:46 PM AEST
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i liked this alot...great write...awesome job
Lots of Love
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by Seikjo on
Sunday, 22nd August 2004 @ 12:20:39 PM AEST
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| Yes it is dark. But it makes me think of this guy i cant stop thinking of. Wonder why. Oh, well i like it very good. |
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 03:39:12 PM AEST
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Very different, I like. It's good when all poetry isnt the same.
love always
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Re: Disfigured Souls
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Sunday, 5th September 2004 @ 06:11:05 PM AEST
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| Heavy and dark but written wonderfuly. Great job! |
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