Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	10-November 03:21:46 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

her scabby knees

Contributed by Cancer on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 06:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

her voice was like a broken bell
echoed down a hollow well
and at the bottom lay a husk
of love born at dawn, but dead by dusk

(and every single word she spoke
she spoke only for me
and every single thing she said
was just a ***** lie to me)

no time to grow, no time to care
just time to blow when i'm not there
a newborn lush with lust to spare
so anxious to flatten that new grown hair
(you know?
"down there")

(and every single thing she did
she did only for me
and every single thing she did
was slowly destroying me)

lips that taste like other men
breath that reeks of swallowed sin
eyes that said, "i love only you"
a body that echoed, "and you and you..."
(and you and you and you and you
and you and you AND YOU AND YOU
AND YOU AND YOU)

(and everytime that she touched me
another scar dimpled my heart
and each time i saw her scabby knees
i was reborn and torn apart)

not good enough
that much i see
she's making a fool
out of me
can't let her go on
to her other guys
while i sit, broken
in her pile of lies
so, though i loathe
her taste and touch
i'll give her the sex
she needs so much

wine and candles
whips and chains
soft romance
and well-deserved pain
i tickle and torture
i punish and please
i let her soar briefly
then bring her to her knees
groaning and screeching
her sweat-slick body bends
and then i smile softly
and exact my revenge

missionary
i want to see her face
bodies gyrate in passion
with stuttered grace
kissing her gently
staring into her empty eyes
i whisper, "i hate you"
'neath her fake pleasure cries
my hands find her throat
and gently restrict her breath
then i smile and squeeze tighter
Line removed by admin

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2004-07-09 18:02:41]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: her scabby knees (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 13th July 2004 @ 11:04:07 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

well i found it odd that the last line was removed but I got the point anyway I think. I liked this poem very powerful and well written like all your poems.

Bobo (Joel)

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com