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Ungrateful One
Contributed by
Rhea
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:16:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I'm full of this rage...
a rage I can't stand.
Would you be so kind
as to lend me a hand?
Ofcourse you won't,
You're stuck up right?
How stupid I was...
to think we could be tight.
You're walking by me...
do you even see me here?
If you don't see me...
Do you feel my pain and tears?
Sometimes I don't even feel like living...
yeah I know it's strange,
but when you're as ignored as I am,
things never really seem to change.
I'm just like every other person...
funny, pretty, and smart...
but about me caring about you....
don't even start.
My relationship with you
has offcially been destroyed...
and everything we had together
has been transformed into a void.
Cheat on me,
and cheat again,
but if you wouldn't have...
imagine what could have been.
Copyright ©
Rhea
... [
2004-07-09 13:16:01]
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Re: Ungrateful One
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:23:07 PM AEST
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Very powerfull masterpeice!
Great jopb with this vent.
Hang tuff.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ungrateful One
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by loopylou on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:31:24 PM AEST
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| this is very sad. i like how personal this is. your anger is really felt by your style of writting its almost a rant. i like it! i like it alot! |
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Re: Ungrateful One
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by Luinil on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:46:33 PM AEST
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| your words definitely express your feelings really well... great job!* |
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