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kiss to the wind
Contributed by
blackholesun
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:22:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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kiss to the wind
see me breathing,
hear me crying,
watch me dying,kiss the wind and fly.
kiss to the wind is dead,
so meet your dead and fly away....
i am not here for you to turn around and
walk away.....
and if you deny yourself
you too will fade away,cause we are all here
ourselves and thats the way it is going to stay.
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blackholesun
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2004-07-09 11:22:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: kiss to the wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:37:39 AM AEST (User
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beautiful
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Re: kiss to the wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by forever_lonely on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:38:45 PM AEST (User
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Once again i like this, i love the structure and the overall flow, your style shines through here and really project the ability you have as a writer
''see me breathing,
hear me crying,
watch me dying,kiss the wind and fly.''
Those lines deserve an extra comment
Consider me impressed
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Re: kiss to the wind
(User Rating: 1 ) by AspenGlow on
Saturday, 4th September 2004 @ 11:09:57 AM AEST (User
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This is a beautiful verse, I like very much and there is much truth in it.
Thank you for sharing this.
Chris |
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