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Song of Sorrow

Contributed by carmen_queasy on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I wanted you to know
For you to understand why I cant be free
Without me ever having to say a word
I wanted you to know you did this to me

And I will sing my song of sorrow while pushing you all away
You mould me, bend me, shape me into who I am today
I will sing my song of sorrow, ducking and hiding from view
You mould me, bend me, and shape me so that I am just like you

I wanted you to know
So that maybe you’ll finally see
That it isn’t enough to just say “you hurt me”
But enough to say “you never loved me”

And I will sing my song of sorrow, a layer of hatred surrounding me
You mould me, bend me, shape me, you did this to me
I will sing my song of sorrow, until it becomes an anthem of hate
You mould me, bend me, shape me, only love appeared too late

I wanted you to know
I’ve been hurting him everyday
I know it’s my fault and not yours
But you moulded me to be this way

And I will sing my song of sorrow, until my voice is gone
You can mould me, bend me, shape me. But I know I really won.
I will sing my song of sorrow, slowly losing faith in love
Mould me, bend me, shape me, but you know I’ll never be enough

I wanted you to know
I wanted him with every ounce of passion I possess
But I pushed him away just as you pushed me
And here lays a bloody mess

I will sing my song of sorrow, until I feel no pain
You can mould me, bend me, shape me, just please don’t let me hurt him again

Copyright Â© carmen_queasy ... [ 2004-07-09 09:55:25]
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Re: Song of Sorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:09:04 AM AEST
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touching sad and melodic, would make great lyrics.

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