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Thoughts of you
Contributed by
Dizza_13
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 03:54:53 AM in AEST
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As I looked at you the other day,
I saw how much in every way,
That I love you.
You know the things you say,
And the way you act every day,
Are amazing.
When you laugh and when you cry,
All I want is you and I,
To be together.
But now I know that there’s no way,
My feelings for you I just can’t say,
No not now.
The sight of you so wonderful,
As I stare my heart falls down,
And it lands just where it should.
Now I’m acting like a fool,
Cos the thought of you so beautiful.
All day long I think about you,
And all night long I dream about you,
And ever since I fell for you,
I felt my life become so true.
And I would walk 500 miles,
And I would walk 500 more,
So that I could catch your tears.
My thoughts are now all of you,
Perfect in everyway,
Flawless by nature,
Though tainted in pain
Copyright ©
Dizza_13
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2004-07-09 03:54:53]
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:18:44 AM AEST
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Heavenly beautifull masterpeice.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by Archie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:30:01 AM AEST
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| I hope your companion is thrilled to read your poetry. I am grateful that you share it with us. |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 05:09:55 AM AEST
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| This tells us you are a beautiful spirit..its a nice poem. venkat |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by lovespoetic0518 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 09:20:58 AM AEST
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really good poem. Nicely stated.
Kimberly |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:42:42 AM AEST
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that was great written, really i like it
keep going |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by corrupted_minds on
Saturday, 17th July 2004 @ 06:34:41 AM AEST
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Brings a tear to my eye dylan, i only wish that someone would feel this way about me.
Loz
xoxoxo |
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Re: Thoughts of you
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by SweetRhythm on
Tuesday, 3rd August 2004 @ 05:50:52 AM AEST
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Awh this poem is very touching, it made me sad inside. It really defines your true loving devotion to the one who captured your heart.
Another good read.
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