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WELCOMELESS WELCOME
Contributed by
tifrob
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:45:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Nightless nights,
Dayless days,
Nothingness sights,
Grayless grays,
Living are dead,
Dead don’t die,
Hell is a head,
Anguish cries,
Fog rolls in,
Covers the earth,
Satan grins,
Malicious mirth,
Breathless breaths,
Heat does rise,
Smell of death,
Bodies fry,
Agony unending,
Shadowed laughter,
Death descending,
Hell ever after.
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tifrob
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2004-07-09 01:45:02]
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Re: WELCOMELESS WELCOME
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by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:54:27 AM AEST
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| If only we all could be so prophetic and insightful while killing calf stubble. Ha Ha. I like the simplicity, I know that we poets often downplay what we are uncertain of, but I think its quite insightful. |
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Re: WELCOMELESS WELCOME
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by Pollo_Picante1120 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 02:26:27 AM AEST
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its really awesome keep it up and its so good that you should send it to a book or chicken soup or something!!!! Keep on keeping on!!
ps read and comment on my poem its called "My Intuition" ok cool
!****~Heather~****! |
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Re: WELCOMELESS WELCOME
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:02:38 AM AEST
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Sorry to disagree with your daughters opinion but this is quite unique and funny. Keep the wry humor and forge ahead.
Smiles,
Rita |
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