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What Love Does To Me
Contributed by
kailadragon
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:42:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I fell in love once
and love betrayed me
I got revenge
and betrayed love
after all we did for each other
he hurt me so deeply
and im having so many problems
dealing with these feelings
and this pain is cutting to my heart
just ask my wrists
purple and red scars
and my knife with the bloodstains
but i've got my wristbands
and excuses
to cover them up
and erase all suspicion
of what has happened to me
and I hide my heartbreak
with a smile
whilst inside
i'm screaming like a madman
and ripping the walls of the black hole
that was once my heart
that he took with him
when he left
Copyright ©
kailadragon
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2004-07-09 01:42:26]
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Re: What Love Does To Me
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by tifrob on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:53:57 AM AEST
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How sad. Please keep writing and maybe a smile will follow. Good Luck.
J~ |
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Re: What Love Does To Me
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by OMEGA_ on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 10:51:08 AM AEST
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| ya it's very sad but i like the way u began your poem .. keep writing |
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Re: What Love Does To Me
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by Kitty_cat on
Saturday, 16th October 2004 @ 11:52:20 AM AEST
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| Very good write, full of emotion and power. Have strength |
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