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hospital walls
Contributed by
clowns_can_burn
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Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:13:47 AM in AEST
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Waking up to the same old white room day after day is quite sad,
being here has never made me felt so alone
Crying every night just thing of what i had,
wishing i had a blade, just to feel better
i dont think i could have done anything different,
that was and is my life,
sorry if you dont understand
i dont think i need to explain it to you
this is me, take it or leave it
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by frohemiasweetie on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:24:03 AM AEST (User
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All I can say is that IT BE LIKE THAT SOMETIMES!! Stay up, remember how boring it is to be dead. No more music videos, Family Guy, ridiculing Bush, etc. Peace |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by slayer_015 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:01:58 AM AEST (User
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Awesome poem,I can feel the pain inside your words seeping into your conscious mind.Writing is great therapy,especially when you write poems like this.
Brian |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by HOPE4ME2 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:04:04 PM AEST (User
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Even in your pain you came across loud and clear, a wonderful write indeed.
Blessings
HOPE4ME2 |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 12:26:43 AM AEST (User
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sad and very emotional write. great poem I can feel your pain as well good job.
Brandy |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by deathdrop on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 06:42:19 AM AEST (User
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they never put me in a hospital, but i do understand you because some of my friends are in the same boat as you. you're not alone! |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:17:01 PM AEST (User
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Well, i thought i was insane
in a mental hospital ay?
well, thats nasty
Interesting write
i can relate |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by TwEeK on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 11:42:59 AM AEST (User
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i can sort of relate with you.
tho ive never been in one, im comeing pretty close to getting put in "the same old white room day after day"
im always skirting right on the fringe of Sanity, and None, usually wondering off into the far deep end of Insanity, only to quickly jump out onto the other side.
moveing poem!
loved the strong finish!
kee up the awsome work!
gone CrAzY, back soon.
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 11:30:43 AM AEST (User
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An honest and forthright commentary. Almost like a letter from the other side, but also the recognition of a starting point.
Stitch |
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Re: hospital walls
(User Rating: 1 ) by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 2nd September 2004 @ 12:51:51 PM AEST (User
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Even though a person may not have been in a hospital... I don't think that there is a person around who hasn't been in this same situation... at some point in their lives... ur not alone my friend...
Great write... I can hear the emotion echoing in ur words...
~Donna~ |
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