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Hardened Heart's Creed
Contributed by
Sonibe
on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:52:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I promise this to
my mind and my soul,
To never get trapped
in the "I love you" hole.
I promise this to
all of me, within,
To never fall in 'love'
............ever again.
I promise this to
my hardened heart,
If I fall in 'love' again
I'll surely fall apart.
I promise this to
all of the people who will read,
I'll never fall in 'love'
for this is the Hardened Heart's Creed.
Copyright ©
Sonibe
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2004-07-09 00:52:45]
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Re: Hardened Heart's Creed
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by kailadragon on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:37:21 AM AEST
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| i'm definatley on this one with you dude.......love sucks but this poem rocks....good write |
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Re: Hardened Heart's Creed
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 05:44:29 PM AEST
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yeah I feel ya 'love' can be rough thats for sure, but sooner or later your heart will heal and you find yourself craving for love and acceptance at least thats what I've find. Writing is a good way to release your anguish very good poem. Ebert and Roeper give it two thumbs up.
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Re: Hardened Heart's Creed
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 16th October 2006 @ 04:22:39 AM AEST
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| Your poem is touching but you will find someone who won't screw around with your heart but it will treat it as a sacred object |
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