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Always a Failure
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:08:44 PM in AEST
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Always a Failure
Through it all
You always fall
And then crawl
Each time you fall
Get off the ground
You're a failure
You never leave
The ground
You never leave
Second place
You expect to win
With every loss
You reach for the sky
Only to be denied
You can't get up
If you first give up
You reach for the sky
Only to be denied
It's only right
That you fail in life
Not a second try
To succeed in life
Every time you fail
You sink lower
Than Hell's level
Through it all
You always fell
You always failed
You're a failure
Beneath Hell
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Re: Always a Failure
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by Sinful_Misery on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:11:19 PM AEST
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| I liked that alot!!! |
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Re: Always a Failure
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:14:29 PM AEST
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nice work. I thought the repitition was interesting - fall, fall, life, life, failure failed. Some might suggest you find more words to describe your thought, but I think in this case it was your best choice.
I thought this was a nice honest write.
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Re: Always a Failure
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by dragon on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:36:45 PM AEST
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I enjoyed reading this poem. It made me think back on things i have tried to do and have failed on doing.
great write
dragon |
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Re: Always a Failure
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by clowns_can_burn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 04:22:09 AM AEST
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| i think this is a great poem. it make me think the real me.. |
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Re: Always a Failure
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:09:12 AM AEST
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i think everyone feels like this sometimes, you drew me into your poem and made my heart try hard to stand up.... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Always a Failure
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by afterdark on
Tuesday, 1st February 2005 @ 02:08:34 PM AEST
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| There is one thing you could never be and that is a failure..You have talent pouring from you Jennifer..There is not one line one stanza here that could have been better..Smile kitten your on Afterdark |
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