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In The Mist
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:39:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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I’m dancing in the mist again
Where love exists without end
As thoughts of you breeze my mind
I celebrate the absence of time
Teardrops are potions as they fall
I drink of you and heed your call
Further, further into fantasy’s realm
Where possibility stands at the helm
I am overcome by a sea of you
Drifting, peacefully, in the blue
Dreams become reality once more
As the horizon eclipses the shore
When voices beckon me back home
I refuse to hear and onward roam
Further, further on into the blue
For in the mist, I’m with you
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Silent-No-More
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Re: In The Mist
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by Sinful_Misery on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:50:46 PM AEST
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| That was cool. Great poem :) |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:53:34 PM AEST
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Sounds absolutely wonderful. Nothing like being in love. All your senses are heightened and life is just better. I love this piece and I am very happy for you.
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Re: In The Mist
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:57:51 PM AEST
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A beautiful write.
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Re: In The Mist
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by Silent-No-More on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:29:27 PM AEST
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I usually don't do this - but - I can't help myself this time. This piece should be read in the context of my recent writes... i.e., as not necessarily 'wonderful'. (sorry to disappoint) I simply decided to go without the angst this time... and dream instead.
Thought maybe some clarification might be good... |
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Re: In The Mist
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:48:33 PM AEST
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| Very good write,, |
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Re: In The Mist
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 07:11:48 PM AEST
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enchanting and beautifully romantic:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: In The Mist
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:57:01 AM AEST
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A lovely sentiment, portrayed expertly with rich rhymes and vivid imagery. I particularly like the line:
"Further, further on into the blue
For in the mist, I’m with you"
Such a perfect way to close out this exceptional piece.
Resurrected to be murdered again,
-V.S. |
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Re: In The Mist
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by brew on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 09:54:00 PM AEST
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| Very sightful.......take the breath away , and more. Seems the love has over powered what wasn't. |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Thunderwolf on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 01:11:06 AM AEST
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A wonderful write
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Re: In The Mist
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by poetryman30 on
Friday, 16th July 2004 @ 11:27:12 AM AEST
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Fantasy/dreams are where love is held for many. Either with a lost love or with someone we love and cannot be with, we live it in our minds.
This is an excellent piece, SNM. May you one day have this fantasy love come true...Mike |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 02:25:52 AM AEST
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*cheers*
I think this was wonderful. The beautiful dream is part of it, but I most like the great imagery. Superbly done. Bravo!
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Re: In The Mist
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by WinterFawn on
Monday, 19th July 2004 @ 07:57:20 AM AEST
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For in the mist, I'm with you...what an awesome poem. I love that last line. Wonderfully composed.
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Re: In The Mist
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 31st August 2004 @ 03:56:12 PM AEST
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sigh...I love this...I know it is only fantasy and dreams...but perhaps one day....
Dreams are the blueprints of tomorrow you know. :) |
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Re: In The Mist
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th May 2006 @ 10:45:07 PM AEST
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| Ah, such a "smile inducer". :-) This is a very beautiful poem, Snem. |
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