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The types of life.
Contributed by
heartfilledblood
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:26:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The kid in his room
The grown man at the pool
The luxeries of life
The luxeries we all can have
The young girl at the saloon
The mom right there with her
The luxeries of life
The luxeries we all can have
The money spent on clothes
The friends and family you have
The luxeries of life
The luxeries we all can have
The old lady on the street
She holds a little brown sheet
It reads the words
Need money for food
The luxeries of life
The luxeries most dont have
The man with the tatered clothes
He sleeps within the dumps
Hes tried so hard to overcome
But seem to not stand alone
The luxeries of life
The luxeries most dont have
As my days pass on
I count each blessing
I now have a family
For once just my sister
Now to work up
For I wont fall
Ill never forget the people
For ill give them my spare change
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Re: The types of life.
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by Dusty on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:28:58 PM AEST
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It makes me happy to see that not all people try to ignore what doesn't involve them. I loved this very much!!
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Re: The types of life.
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:36:20 PM AEST
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It's wonderful that you don't take all the wonderful luxuries offered to you for granted.You are one lucky person,I do hope you realize that,not only will you feel more blessed,you're heart will remain in the right place.Good piece,
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Re: The types of life.
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by Trisha on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 10:32:04 PM AEST
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| I Like This And I Am Happy Someone Is Opening People Minds |
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Re: The types of life.
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by Pyrofungus on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:48:47 AM AEST
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i love it! it's great! i respect the people that do have a heart and will spare their change for the less fortunate! we're way to spoiled in this life that we live...why not share it??/
please comment on my work too
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Re: The types of life.
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 29th July 2004 @ 12:36:39 PM AEST
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hey babe. this is a good poem. good flow to it. it starts all happy and then just gradually gets to the bad points of life. good poem. keep up the good work. i'll call u later and i love u.:D
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Re: The types of life.
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 11:57:45 PM AEST
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Daric, the message here warms my heart. Yes we are spoiled and so many do without the bare necessities. You have a great heart and an immense amount of talent.
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