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Ode to Chocolate
Contributed by
theraven
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:52:54 PM in AEST
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So sweet, delirious, as
I run through the sand
To meet that which melts
In my mouth, and not my hand.
Chewy caramel, crisp wafers,
Sweet nougat, and milky taste,
Eat it up, eat it all
Don’t let it go to waste.
Such is an enemy,
But so tempting a friend,
And falsely true, like so,
Will bring me to an end.
Calories, sugars, and
Total fat off the charts,
Straight to the hips, breaks
Out on the face, and kills my heart.
-The Raven-
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theraven
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2004-07-08 20:52:54]
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Re: Ode to Chocolate
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:56:16 PM AEST
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Chocolate, Yummy!!!! Now I want some.
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Re: Ode to Chocolate
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:01:38 PM AEST
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| Yes I enjoyed.. with a smile great |
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Re: Ode to Chocolate
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:21:29 PM AEST
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So what you are telling me is that chocolate is NOT one of the major food groups and I don't have to include it in my daily diet? (please don't tell anyone I know that). This is a delighfully delicious write.
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Re: Ode to Chocolate
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Tuesday, 10th August 2004 @ 02:44:49 PM AEST
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| GOOD TO KNOW IM NOT THE ONLY CHOCOLATE FREAK AROUND- CUTE WRITE |
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Re: Ode to Chocolate
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by silverjade on
Monday, 16th August 2004 @ 07:34:43 PM AEST
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| haha thats funny and cute i like it |
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