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Explanations
Contributed by
darkfairy1188
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:10:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You asked me “why?”
But how can I explain to you;
What I can’t explain to myself?
No one seems to know how I feel.
Do I love you?
Do I hate you?
How can I tell?
When I’m around you I can’t seem to breathe.
And yet every word that comes out of your mouth makes me seethe.
I try to tell myself I hate you;
Yet everyday I can’t wait to see you.
Don’t you feel the same?
Or to you is it just a game?
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2004-07-08 20:10:04]
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Re: Explanations
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:14:55 PM AEST
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| good read |
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Re: Explanations
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by Colleen on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:30:14 PM AEST
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| That rocks, and it's actually a feeling I can relate to! Holy smokes, you rock! |
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Re: Explanations
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by TheRaven on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:39:22 PM AEST
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great write, awesome emotion being conveyed...keep it up
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