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A Mothers Sin
Contributed by
WestCPunk
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:05:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
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A mothers sin
Is neglecting her children
A mothers mistake
Is leaving her children in heartache
Mommy why do you do this to me?
Why haven't I talked to you lately?
Mommy why are you never home?
Did you know I'm suffering from Bipolar syndrome?
Don't you even care?
Are you even aware
Of the pain I go through
Just to keep up with you?
I don't even remember the last time
You ever said anything nice
Or gave me any advice
In my eyes you have committed a crime
Just you wait and see
Someday
You'll hit replay
And dramatically ask yourself why
I chose to tell you goodbye
I love you mommy
And so do the rest of your children
Even though you've committed
A mothers sin!
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WestCPunk
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2004-07-08 20:05:43]
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by babygirl2004 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:17:25 PM AEST
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this is my worst nightmare that one of my children would write something like this because i am not with them but i do love them
this poem is so touching but it breaks my heart to read check out my poem the most precious gift once and let me know what u think
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:19:11 PM AEST
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I simply cannot understand a mother that can neglect her children for any reason. Even if she can't be with them she should make sure someone is there to care for and nurture them. I agree that it is a sin. One that I don't think I could forgive.
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by RedRose on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:30:25 PM AEST
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| I truly agree my mother is the same never seemed to care great write |
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by darkfairy1188 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 11:16:36 PM AEST
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i know the feeling. my mother is never around. i've been cutting myself for years and she's never noticed. some of my friends suggest that i have depression and they don't even know about the cutting, and yet she doesnt notice.
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by venkat on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 01:34:07 AM AEST
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I sincerely agree with the comment of Rita.
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by gery_giggles on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 08:22:09 AM AEST
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dark poem...and so sad...
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Re: A Mothers Sin
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 12th July 2004 @ 06:15:10 PM AEST
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This is indeed the saddest sin a mother can commit, and it's a sad thing to read about as well. You've expressed your pain very well here.
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