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How I'm Feeling Right Now
Contributed by
PieceOfABrokenSoul
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 07:14:44 PM in AEST
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Even more when I said some stuff about her boyfriend that he had told me once. He told me he was going to break up with her once because she wouldn't have sex with him. I think we all know that if you really love someone things like looks and sex don't matter. Anyways, after I told her she asked him if they were true and of course he lied about it. Afterwards she hated me because she believed him and thought I was lieing. At the time I was foolish and I kept pushing her and telling her I wasn't lieing. If I had been smart I would have left it alone and atleast saved a friendship but I wasn't and now I've lost my best friend and the one girl that was ever truly meant for me. Well, I've wasted enough time on explanations for the past, here's now.
What have I done?
Where have you been?
What happened to our fun?
Why couldn’t I keep it all bottled in?
It doesn’t matter now.
Everybody hates me now.
What happened to the sound?
The sweet sound of your voice.
My feet once left the ground.
But then I made the choice.
The choice to fall.
To fall from it all.
I guess I missed it all.
It doesn’t matter now.
Everybody hates me now.
This just something to tell you how I feel right now.
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Re: How I'm Feeling Right Now
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by matts_sweetie_04 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 08:39:49 PM AEST
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good poem. I can relate to this poem. My boyfriend and I had trouble in the past. He dated a girl who cheated on him all the time and it killed me cause i still loved him and would never do that to him. I tried to tell him and he thought I was just making it up to get him to break up with her so I could get him back. Things did work out for us though(thank god!). I know what you are going through. Keep the faith and be strong! I think this poem was also good cause you expressed your feelings so well. If ya ever wanna talk send me a message and I will reply to ya.
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Re: How I'm Feeling Right Now
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Sunday, 11th July 2004 @ 07:43:15 PM AEST
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Great write.. Ive been there too, So I can relate to this..
Cheers Robert.. |
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