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A JASMINE BEE
Contributed by
robertkilpatrick
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:05:30 PM in AEST
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A crimson Dove
Comes to me,
A jasmine Bee
Comes to you.
The peace she brings
With an Olive branch
The nectar he sings
When he does his dance.
© Robert Kilpatrick
Copyright ©
robertkilpatrick
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2004-07-08 18:05:30]
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Terry on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:12:27 PM AEST
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| I read it twice so I could get the meaning of the poem. This one is really good and there is a touch of Spring to it. |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:17:45 PM AEST
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This is so lovely, Robert. I felt so peaceful and serene reading it. Thank you for posting it.
Rita |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Gentledove on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:22:53 PM AEST
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cool.
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Glo on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:34:49 PM AEST
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Very nice Robert. Doing what nature intends. Thanks for the lovely post.
Glo! |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by spiffyphil on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 06:55:54 PM AEST
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| More said with less, good job. |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Black13 on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 09:38:33 PM AEST
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This was very sublime.
Kinda wish it was longer though.
I think this is filled with some nice images though and leaves alot up to the imagination.
Nicely done. |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:02:48 AM AEST
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enjoyable
Michelle |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by Ethereal_Engine on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 12:34:38 AM AEST
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| You're absolutly correct Ways of the Water is a story not a poem, but nobody ever seems to mind when I post something in story format. Thanks for your comment. I like the simpicity of this and how the dove and the bee are of poetic and viberent colors. In only eight short lines you've convayed a wonderful picture. Good work. |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 28th July 2004 @ 09:47:43 PM AEST
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All I can find to say is this write was beautiful,the one and only word I can find to describe your piece.
PumpkinPie |
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Re: A JASMINE BEE
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 12:06:54 AM AEST
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| Holy H-E double hockey sticks. this was freakin awesome. thank God i was looking at EEs' comment thingy. Thanks E and Thank you Robert Kilpatrick. |
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