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Mind Games
Contributed by
LittleWillow
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Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:18:16 PM in AEST
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I went to see the Octopus's Garden
the creatures played a song for me
I looked out a window thousands of feet up
and watched majestic carousel horses
the great halls of yesteryears
played games with my mind
the music of the past
plucked my soul like a chord
crystal waters, sparked facets
what timbre, what a symphony
fortunes unfolded on cobblestone streets
what mysteries lie in the depths
of the blackest midnights?
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LittleWillow
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2004-07-08 16:18:16]
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Re: Mind Games
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by Archie on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:43:19 PM AEST
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| This is good, I thought it was gonna be another sad poem about the stresses of love but you surprised me. I will have to check out more. |
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Re: Mind Games
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by PsychoScissors on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 04:59:33 PM AEST
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| wow...that was a beautiful poem. There are really no words to describe it...It's just that this kind of writing in the kind I love best. The Style you have is my favorite ^_^ |
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